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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement

#country #language
The two maps illustrate
road
access
 to a
city
 hospital in the year 2007 and how it has developed in 2010. Overall, there has been a larger infrastructure development in 2010, and
number
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 of advanced features have been added around the
city
 hospital while remaining the location of the hospital as it was. In 2010, two
car
 parks have been separately added, for
staff
, the same location has been reserved while adding new
car
 park to the east of the hospital and it is larger than the
staff
 parking. By removing the six bus stations beside hospital
road
, a new bus station has been added to the west of the hospital
road
 which has
access
 to both Ring
Road
 and
city
road
 via two new roundabouts. The
access
 to the
city
 hospital has been increased by adding a new entrance from the east side of the hospital from the public
car
 park. The
staff
 will have direct
access
 from
staff
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the staff
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car
 park to the hospital.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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