Many young people are leaving their homes in rural areas to study or work in the cities. What are the reasons? Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

In recent years, the issue of

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immigration of a young generation to

metropolis

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has attracted people’s attention. Some experts believe that capital

cities

provide abundant job opportunities, comparing to living in

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areas, while others oppose that

this

development is likely to contribute negative outcomes in plentiful ways. In

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essay, there could be a variety of reasons for

this

, and I am convinced that

this

trend has a great number of demerits. As for the

first

question, there are two

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reasons why the number of young people

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to migrate from their hometowns.

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with the primary finding, most

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universities are located in the heart of

cities

;

this

means that these universities induce

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ambitious students who desire to earn higher degrees. An illustration of

this

is that Chulalongkorn University, one of the recognized

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institutions in Thailand, is in Bangkok considered as the principal goal among Thai students. A

further

reason is that a wide range of career opportunities

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offered by various organizations.

For example

, there are bountiful public limited companies opening a large number of job positions with higher

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and fringe benefits.

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, some professions have a possibility to get an acceptance

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to the fact that the majority of companies

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in

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. With regards to the

second

question, negative impacts cannot be overlooked.

Firstly

, one of the obvious is that the exponential growth of the population in the

cities

resulting in transport infrastructure in terms of traffic congestion.

Moreover

,

this

phenomenon does not only directly affect

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cities

, but it

also

leads the problem to rural areas. Local farming,

for instance

, could be abandoned since people decided to work in capital

cities

thanks to limited economic activities in

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areas. In conclusion, I would like to reiterate the drawbacks of moving to the

cities

far outstrip the benefits.

Although

there are potential positive outcomes, they outweigh the negatives. The government need to implement

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policies to mitigate

this

issue

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if they want to solve the immigration of suburb people.