Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There is little room for doubt that, in recent times,

sports persons

Correct your spelling

sportspersons

show examples

are earning more as compared to those who indulge in other professions.It is believed by some that it is completely justified while others consider it unfair. In my opinion, every profession is equally important and professionals should be given equal salaries according to their contributions.

To begin

with, many people justify the

sports

persons current salaries because of some reasons.

Firstly

,

sports

is

such

a profession in which

a

Change the article

an

show examples

individual needs to be physically active and healthy. A player has to do

lot

Change the article

a lot

show examples

of

hardwork

Correct your spelling

hard work

and struggle in order to achieve a name in

sports

Add an article

the sports

show examples

industry.

Moreover

, it is not an overnight achievement , constant training and practice

is

Change the verb form

are

show examples

required which cannot be done in one day.

That is

why

,

Remove the comma

apply

show examples

it is considered reasonable for a player to earn more.

However

, there are some who believe it is unfair for other professionals

such

as doctors and scientists. No doubt that sportsmen represent their country at international levels which is a great achievement, but the efforts of those who indulge in other essential professions cannot be ignored. Doctors,

for instance

, always remain available to help their patients in case of any emergency, but their efforts are not appreciated by the government.

Furthermore

, scientists and engineers make our lives more comfortable due to their inventions but

such

people often get paid very

less

Correct quantifier usage

little

show examples

. To conclude, I agree with those who consider it unfair. Every profession should be given equal importance and it is possible only if government start treating all professionals equally.