The use of mobile phones should be banned in public places like libraries and shops. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Many
people
believe that using communication equipment must be forbidden in public areas such
as libraries, museums, and shops. From my perspective, I suppose that it depends on what types of public places
= areas are suitable = appropriate = unique for specific situations = particular circumstances.
On the one hand, keeping silent in public accommodations which need a totally = virtually quiet atmosphere is one of important = crucial = imperative = significant social awareness. When people
go to the library, they absolutely require = acquire a different atmosphere = environment compared to their houses or at the coffee shops, which will support = assist them to improve = enhance memory skill, and their concentration. For instance
, in the library, which is the ideal place for researching bits of knowledge, finding = discovering information, therefore
people
go to this
place always try to quiet as much as possible and this
action makes other people
feel they have a private environment.
On the other hand
, having some public places
which are built for connecting social events such
as parks, shops. opposite for quiet places
which people
just need the atmosphere to activate their brains, these places
allow people
to join physical activities or make noise with music. Imagining that in the park they walk, play badminton, or play soccer without noise, or people
go shopping without chatting with each other, it feels terrible and boring. For instance
, RMIT also
built a sports hall, where students can do what they want according to a lot of noise without any complaint. (238)
In conclusion, any accommodation will be built with its own purpose. People
just keep consciousness about what the rules in these places
allow them to do.Submitted by plt13112001 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite