The use of mobile phones should be banned in public places like libraries and shops. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Many
people
believe that using communication equipment must be forbidden in public areas Use synonyms
such
as libraries, museums, and shops. From my perspective, I suppose that it depends on what types of public Linking Words
places
= areas are suitable = appropriate = unique for specific situations = particular circumstances.
On the one hand, keeping silent in public accommodations which need a totally = virtually quiet atmosphere is one of important = crucial = imperative = significant social awareness. When Use synonyms
people
go to the library, they absolutely require = acquire a different atmosphere = environment compared to their houses or at the coffee shops, which will support = assist them to improve = enhance memory skill, and their concentration. Use synonyms
For instance
, in the library, which is the ideal place for researching bits of knowledge, finding = discovering information, Linking Words
therefore
Linking Words
people
go to Use synonyms
this
place always try to quiet as much as possible and Linking Words
this
action makes other Linking Words
people
feel they have a private environment.
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On the other hand
, having some public Linking Words
places
which are built for connecting social events Use synonyms
such
as parks, shops. opposite for quiet Linking Words
places
which Use synonyms
people
just need the atmosphere to activate their brains, these Use synonyms
places
allow Use synonyms
people
to join physical activities or make noise with music. Imagining that in the park they walk, play badminton, or play soccer without noise, or Use synonyms
people
go shopping without chatting with each other, it feels terrible and boring. Use synonyms
For instance
, RMIT Linking Words
also
built a sports hall, where students can do what they want according to a lot of noise without any complaint. (238)
In conclusion, any accommodation will be built with its own purpose. Linking Words
People
just keep consciousness about what the rules in these Use synonyms
places
allow them to do.Use synonyms
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite