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Some people think that watching TV causing weight problems with children.Do you agree with this?what solution can we suggest to tackle children weight problems .?

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Due to the development of the technology,Modern lifestyle has been changed to using more electronic equipment
such
 as Television,While it becomes a part of the children's life and causing
weight
 problems.Overall,I totally agree with the spending
time
 on
TV
 casing
weight
 issues, because
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weight
 problem is amounting in a brisk
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.
Firstly
,In these days most parents are like to keeps their
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 inside their apartments
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since they can easily monitor them while on their day to day works without any difficulties.
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 in
this
 ,situation parents are used to switching on
TV
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 and playing a cartoon,a game or some educational programme and infinity of
time
 has been given to children.Owing to
this
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time
 spending on
TV
 without having any exercise,
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 are getting overweight and other side effects
such
 as diabetics. In my solution,I would suggest that it has been great opportunity to build a healthy and sporty
childrens
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children
 by promoting them for some group or individual sport even in early days of their life.
However
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 needs to balance their diet with some healthy foods to grow up while doing exercise,Other than are getting ill on a regular basis.I would not say parents should stop watching
TV
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 but it must be under monitoring with certain
time
 frames as there are many positive advantages as well as disadvantages to new technology.
Finally
,With all the modern developments in technology,Television comes with both positive and negative reflections on
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 lifestyle,while addiction to
TV
 is not good for
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 but with a balanced diet and frequent exercise plans and spending
time
 on a sport could manage the
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TV
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Such
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 in these days.
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