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The given chart demonstrates the percentage of the average changes
of
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 house
expenditures
 in five cities New
York
,
Madrid
, Tokyo,
Frankfurt
 and
London
 from 1990 to 2002
in contrast
average
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 house prices in 1989. Overall, it is clear that the rate of prices in
London
, Tokyo and New
York
 declined while
Frankfurt
 and
Madrid
 average
expenditures
 rose in
first
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 period (1990-1995). Regarding
to
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1996-2002, the percentage of spending in
London
,
Frankfurt
,
Madrid
 and New
York
 increased whereas Tokyo decreased. As for
London
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 the
expenditures
 declined to 7.5% between 1990 and 1995 and
this
 rate increased to 12% from 1996 to 2002. It is apparently seen that
New
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york
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 the number of spending decreased to 5% in
first
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the first
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 period,
this
 rate rose to 5% in
second
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 period. According to
Madrid
 and
Frankfurt
, the percentage of
expenditures
 increased slightly to 2% and 3% respectively between 1990 from 1995 , spending rates reached
at
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4% and 1% respectively from 1996 to 2002.
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