Some countries are considering imposing curfews in which teenagers will not be allowed outdoors at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this policy?

Some countries are considering the proposal of imposing a curfew on teenagers in which they would not be allowed to go outdoors at

night

unless they are accompanied by an adult. The most justifiable reason behind

this

step is the increasing crime rate in towns. And teenagers are more prone to becoming a victim

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that. In my opinion, I believe that it is an understandable policy and should be implemented. The essay below

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highlights the reasons that gave rise to

such

a policy.

Firstly

, the main reason for taking the strategy into consideration is the escalating rate of crimes and the fact that it is young people who are targeted most of the time as they are considered to be more vulnerable. To illustrate, these minors spend entire

nights

with friends partying or roaming on the streets which makes them an easy target for robbers or kidnappers.

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, sometimes they lose control

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themselves and over enjoyment leads to a set of horrifying events like throwing people into pools for fun which can cause death if they do not know swimming. And all these are most likely to happen at

night

when there are no elders around.

Secondly

, adolescents get involved

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illegal stuff which

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carried out at

night

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For example

, they might say they are going to a friend's house for studying but

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they are going to drink alcohol and do drugs there. Often, they are seen driving at

nights

without

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and even worst overspeeding and taking

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in dangerous races which ultimately leads to getting arrested or

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loosing

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their lives.

Also

, depression is common in adolescents.

Therefore

, due to a bad mental

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they commit suicides which are frequent at

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. To conclude, minors get involved in various dangerous activities and most of them are carried out at

night

. As mentioned earlier in the essay, I hold the view that imposing curfews on them which would allow them to get out at

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only when accompanied by an adult is relevant as it can save them from getting involved

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several criminal activities and save their lives as well.