More and more wild animals are being kept in the zoo these days. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh its disadvantages?

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this

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modern era, the wildlife conservation authorities have resorted to making the zoo home for non-domestic

animals

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for

safety

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both

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the public and the

animals

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. I believe

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idea has enormous merits than demerits for the following reasons.

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with, there are

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ample

reasons to justify the above-given statement as

first

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, the public is protected from attack by wild

animals

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;

for example

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,

such

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as Lions and Tigers are

very

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dangerous beast to the community as they injure the people,

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, sometimes the population get worst wound in order to they spend a lot of amount on

medical

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bill, even death might

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.

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, these kinds of

fauna

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should be protected in the zoo because the

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hunters

are hunted wildlife for their food and economy,

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, more and more

fauna

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are endangered

in

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these days.

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,

this

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kind of non-domestic

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animals

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should be kept in

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zoos rather than

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roaming

coming

in residential areas.

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, every

creatures

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should be lived in freedom,

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no one

does

not

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have a

rights

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to

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in

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cage

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but many

fauna

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conservative persons are done

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, they earn huge

amount

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of money from

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visiting these

place

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.

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, Lion is the king of

forest

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the forest

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, but we

put

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in a

cage

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like a cat so, they cannot understand of the entire life who am

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thus

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, it will bein

stresssful

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stressful

in life long.

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trend

certaily

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,

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should be affected

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the

fauna

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well-being, their's house is a forest

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a

cage

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but we are kept in

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cage

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,

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, they might be gotten

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and

depression

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,

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, they will be

attacked

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to the

care taker

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.

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, the wildlife should be lived in freedom. To conclude, In my opinion, about

this

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, the non-domestic

animals

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should be kept in

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a cage

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cage

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instead

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of roaming in residential

place

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because they are not

a

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pet

animlas

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animals

animal

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animals

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are properly maintain

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and protect

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the zoo authorities in order to save their's life from hunting.