In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of diverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages.

Some
people
express their ideas about using fully automated
vehicles
,
such
as transport and travel would be an ideal in the future. Some others think giving
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control of the
vehicles
to the computer would be a disadvantage. In
this
essay, I am going to
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discus
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my personal thought about the topic.
First
of all, nowadays, there is a trend to drive and electric
vehicles
all around the world. These electric vehicle concepts lead the technology to improve the
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transportation system.
However
, with the busy
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people
are looking for
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extra time to carry on their work. If a person is driving
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to the school
then
the office will take around two hours. Using
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car
will save that two hours to have their breakfast in the vehicle or prepare some documents and presentations of the office.
Moreover
,
people
tend to believe that automated
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handle the situation better than the manual method. Something just likes the Tesla
car
that has
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to drive itself and avoid
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accident matter of a
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, most
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car
manufactures
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adopt
this
technology
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their
vehicles
. The railway lines
also
used automated trains and will
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in the future.
On the other hand
, some part of the community believed that
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provided fully authorization to the
vehicles
would lead
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fatal accidents.
However
, most
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the
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people
do not trust
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driverless
vehicles
due to technical problems,
such
as
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or program failure, unable to identify
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the potential
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cause of an accident, failure about pedestrians safety and
finally
, someone can
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into the
car
and take control of it. In my point of view, I could
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using driverless
vehicles
in the future would
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to
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the
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humankind,
such
as passenger transportation and hazel free goods and cargo transportation.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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