In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Transportation plays a key role in the development of a country’s economy. As
such
, it is not surprising that some individuals believe the significance of creating new lines between cities and upgrading the
transports
that are being used now.
Nonetheless
, it is known by all that both these points require a huge sum of money.
This
essay will focus on the idea that these two do not have differences in their effects. Constructing new railway lines can experience drawbacks other than finance. One is
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and/or space where the new road will be built. It should be considered that creating new lines needs a wide enough space and there is a high probability that areas, like farms and other open spaces, can be used and
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destroyed for these projects.
However
, paving for new rails can result in a faster transaction of businesses, both big and small, between urban and rural areas.
As a result
, commerce and even tourism can boom. As for spending money on modernizing prevailing public
transports
, certain downsides are identified.
For instance
, it is quite complicated to totally upgrade most public
transports
easily. Authorities should think about the total number of
transports
that needs improvements.
Moreover
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up these vehicles does not necessarily mean that it can reduce the stress of traffic
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. Despite that, having a bigger and better means of transport can provide convenience to daily commuters. To conclude, these projects thrive on the budget allocated by a government from the tax collected from the citizens of that nation. Even so, it is important to note that these views are inevitable but they share the same goal and
that is
to provide convenience both to locals and businesses alike.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • infrastructure
  • efficient
  • congestion
  • sustainable
  • environmentally friendly
  • connectivity
  • economic growth
  • public transportation
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