Some people focus on news in their own country, while others think it is more important to be aware of international news. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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plays a pivotal role in edifying people about the things happening around them.
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, there are
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predominantly
two contrasting views where a section of society vehemently deems that only local
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are
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important to know, whereas others emphasize that global
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are more imperative than local
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. Apparently, various factors make a section of people advocate that the awareness of own nation’s
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is only required and have several reasons to substantiate it.
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and foremost is, regional
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are
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directly connected to dwellers of that area due to which it has more impact on them.
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, nowadays, almost every newspaper publish weekly articles related to
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vaccination centre,
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, people take
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of these drives.
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, knowing about the culture of any other region might not be interesting to the readers,
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,
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inclination is more towards national
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.
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, aged citizens are more connected to their own culture,
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why
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they show disinterest towards getting
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of
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the customs of any other country.
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, some believe that international
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are
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essential to read in
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era for
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myriad
reasons. Chiefly,
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proves auxiliary
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at the time of disaster where international aid is offered by several nations to the country in crisis.
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mainly
become
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feasible with the awareness about international
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via various sources.
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,
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years ago, Japan was hit by
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and Canada, India, America and many other nations extended
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hand for providing them
food
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with food
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, water and other basic
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.
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this
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, developing nations can take reference from the
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of developed countries to improve their laws, policies or technology which could ultimately result in the overall development of their own land. In conclusion,
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local
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is more impactful when compared to international
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in terms of direct impact on the lives of residents yet, I staunchly believe that the importance of global
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in
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technologically advanced era cannot be overlooked.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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