Some people think individuals are born to be leaders, others believe leadership can be learnt. Discuss both views & give your opinion.

Leadership

is a highly controversial topic in our modern world. It is said that some

people

are born with certain

characteristics

that enable them to become

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great

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, while others argue that

leadership

is a learnable quality. Personally, I strongly agree with the latter viewpoint because training and experience are more important than innate ability in

this

situation. On one hand, it is true that many individuals are born with distinctive

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traits that allow them the opportunity to become talented

leaders

.

Firstly

,

leaders

tend to be those who are strong self-belief, intelligence and decisiveness. As result, a good leader with these

characteristics

can use his extraordinary critical thinking and analytical ability to come up with effective and creative strategies for any problems that arise at work.

Secondly

, born

leaders

often have the capacity to motivate, inspire and encourage

people

around them toward a common goal leading to

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success.

Therefore

, individuals who lack

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these

characteristics

may have difficulty inspiring the belief and loyalty that all

leaders

require and end up as followers rather than managers.

On the other hand

, there are

also

people

who believe that

leadership

skills can actually be achieved through proper training and effort.

This

is the primary reason for

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of institutes offering

leadership

training programs increases dramatically nowadays.

For instance

, public speaking is one of many

leadership

skills which these schools can teach individuals who are shy and lack

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to find their feet in the

leadership

battle.

Furthermore

, it is

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that many successful

leaders

were not

natural born

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leaders

, but they have been

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to remain curious to innovative approaches, follow their passion and understand the importance of patience and empathy with their subordinates. All

this

would culminate in them becoming great

leadership

role models for their team members. In conclusion,

although

some traits related to

leadership

are likely inborn

characteristics

, I strongly agree that there is tremendous room for

people

to grow into high positions by

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learning the skills and personal

characteristics

of great

leaders

.