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Most modern families have both parents working and as a result children spend less and less time with their parents. What is the reason for this? What problems can cause this?

It is often said that working
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 spend little
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 with their kids.
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, there is a big deficiency in family bonding.
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,
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 varies from family to family. When it comes to looking after
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, employed
parents
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 become busy with their work and are unable to cooperate with their infants.
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 lack of concentration results
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formal
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relationship
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. At the same
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,
children
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 become desolated and feel the ignorance of the family gathering. So a gap is created among them.
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 gap shows
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unhealthy and unethical
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.
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, there will be less communication between the family members at an event.
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, most of the
parents
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 are not aware of their pupil’s matter
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 as school study.
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,
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parents
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 have less knowledge about their strengths and weaknesses.
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 is an alarming issue
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 needs more attention.
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 is because
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 families might not know about their current whereabouts. Another concern is the usage of electronic gadgets.
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, if all the family members are under the influence of onscreen devices,
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 will eventually lead to having a digital contact. Having a healthy conversation will probably fade away gradually. No matter what happens, one of the
parents
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 should take
initiative
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 steps to
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 up an ideal relationship. When it comes to knowing the interests and flaws of their beloved
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, professional
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 need to consume
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 on their pupils.
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,
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 will be able to judge and correct their rights and wrongs.
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, they can raise their daughters and sons with positivity and proper guidance.
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,
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 should pay more attention whenever their
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 feel sad or happy.
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, they should share their good and bad experiences. In
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 way, the youth with physical or mental problems can have a peaceful mind when they deal
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 with their
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.
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, they can have a better understanding. In conclusion, I believe that active
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 should spend
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quality
time
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 with their kids at least once or twice a week. So that there is no misunderstanding between them.

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