In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

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Nowadays, in many nations people are tending to show interest in knowing the true history of the home they reside in. Perhaps, we may think
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as the
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nature of humans, but it has few other reasons
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that, getting
information
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enthusiastic to do research on
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the building is the major intention of finding the history. It is because of the influences of horror or scary films youngsters watch today.
Next
, is to ensure the safety and protection it is worth
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an idea about the quality of the home where we lie, like how old the construction is. Another motive is to understand the value of the
house
.
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in
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of traditional houses, which has strong wooden interiors. So in brief, to have a peaceful stay and to understand the worth of the
house
people are attentive to collect data about the buildings.
On the other hand
, the greatest task is, to find the sources of details about aged buildings. Some possible modes are enquiring with
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, searching in local library books and through Medias
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. If the
house
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any unusual incident obviously the newspaper could have reported that, so collecting
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newspaper
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worthy. In fact, people can
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information
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and from property sellers too.
However
, the adequacy of
information
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, it is important to gather details from the trustable sources about it.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Historical research
  • Genealogy
  • Architectural styles
  • Heritage
  • Relics
  • Oral history
  • Archival records
  • Museum exhibits
  • Historical societies
  • House tours
  • Renovation projects
  • Original blueprints
  • Careful documentation
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