Nowadays technology is increasingly being used to monitor what people are saying and doing (for example, through cell phone tracking and security cameras). In many cases, the people being monitored are unaware that this is happening. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

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, technology is unexpectedly advanced and can have certain uses.

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, if used in the right manner for the right purposes

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as tracking and surveillance on certain people which is done almost everywhere, it is now so common that it goes unnoticed.

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with, technological advancement is something which is experienced almost everywhere in the

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. Keeping track of certain devices and what they are used for can be very beneficial for activities

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as avoidance of online frauds which can be kept an eye on from any online server.

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, the FBI stated in 2015 that 50%

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cases of online crimes were reported once internet surveillance was introduced. Call tapping and

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as security cameras have many roles in helping police departments all around the

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to identify certain criminals and aiding

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illegal acts harming the country. In general, 70% of public places are watched by cameras for safety. It is

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, monitoring might be considered as a major privacy breach

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not preferring these activities. Most of the population might

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being discovered they are being watched all the time, as online data saved on humans might be sold to third-party organizations.

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as, Microsoft was convicted of selling

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data to companies for AD campaigns which

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to several people breaking their trust in securities. In my opinion,

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automation has several benefits,

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put to the right use, would be accountable for many generations in the long run.

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, it might not be considered safe and trustworthy in terms of different minds.