. These days, many people prefer ready to eat food outside of their home rather than homemade food. Do you think this has more advantages or disadvantages?

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people are influenced more by
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life-style
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.
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symbol.
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the demerits of fast
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, still they
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habit because of
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work
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essay will discuss the pros and cons of outside eating trends because, I believe that, homemade foods can keep
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healthy always. To
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, the people can eat homemade foods with
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because
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they
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better about the ingredients they added and
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they maintained while cooking.
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a human
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can enjoy fresh
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in
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delicious way.
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, while cooking at home people never use
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colours or preservatives.
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, the
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people
will not even think of using
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or vegetable. So, the person who
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homemade
food
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can stay healthy and happy. To continue with, the person who
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regularly at a restaurant can easily land up with many health issues.The
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and the foremost one is gastric discomforts. It is because of, the use of
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artificial
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agents.
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, they may use expired items
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for cooking.
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will cause serious problems to
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human
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like, from a simple stomach ache to
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colon cancer. To summarize it is dangerous to take fast
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frequently.
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, having fast
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daily can cause
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issue
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to
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and homemade eating nature can increase life span. So, it is the individual's choice to choose the best.
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