The high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising but not the real need of the society where such products are sold. Do you agree or disagree?

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With the development of
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sector,
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the market
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is flooded with commodities
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are sold in large volumes.
This
trend is accelerated even more by commercials that promote articles
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are
otherwise
worthless for the community. I agree with
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statement to a large extent on the grounds that even though advertisements make
people
aware
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recently launched goods,
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impact of subliminal advertising cannot be ignored. To commence with, there is no iota of doubt that when the commodity is promoted, customers come to know about the
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existence of
such
good.
As a result
, buyers can satisfy their needs after getting all the information from the advertisement due to which articles become popular. In
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both customer and seller are benefited. On the flip side, some famous articles gain high sales because it is pretended that they enhance social status.
Subsequently
, many individuals acquire it only as a status symbol even if it is of no or minimal use for them.
For example
, Apple launches
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version of mobiles annually.
Although
, it serves the basic function of communication with a few advanced features most
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the
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people
buy it to improve their social image.
Furthermore
, publicity of goods
encourage
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induced buying. In
such
a phenomenon, free gifts are given with less important but expensive products.
Consequently
,
people
are influenced by temptations and indulge in bulk buying which results
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stockpiling in their
store rooms
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. To cite an example, during festival season, sauce manufacturers campaign about their products with offers. Innocent customers fell prey
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their traps and buy several packs of sauce which are thrown later on when they surpass their manufacturing date. To conclude, the purpose of promotion campaigns is to cognise
people
about the use and availability of goods but they allure them to get it for upgrading standard of life while they are worthless for the society.
Such
a practice should be stopped by promoters.
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