Some people think that the government should spend money on adult’s population who can’t read and write while other not. To what extend to you agree or disagree?

Some group of

people

asset that authority

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should

spend

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amount

most

of

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budget

for adults who are

unfuntion

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function

of reading and

wrighting

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writing

to enhance

thier

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their

career , while some

people

disagree and think that government should pay for other factors that significantly

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for all citizens. In the following paragraphs , both of these viewpoints will be discussed in

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detail

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before

conclusion

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a conclusion

the conclusion

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is reached. On the one hand , there are many reasons why supporting

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adults

who have some problem of education , especially the ability of reading and

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writing

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.

Frirstly

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Firstly

First

, high level of ability can be gian more income and better occupations , leading to improve quality of

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their

family and

thier

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their

children.

For example

, drivers who can not read receive less salary than

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officers

who are able to do that more as well as

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the person

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person

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people

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who can write can be hired on the position higher than one .

Therefore

. Spending some money to advocate

this

group is

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worth with

forthwith

for

inverstment

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investment

to eliminate poverty.

On the other hand

, there

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some

argument

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arguments

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that

not

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do not

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support the idea mentioned above. Others believe that government

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should

play an important role

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in

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budgets for other things that influence

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apply

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the

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majority

of citizens.

First

and foremost , they think that adults can

gian

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gain

income from themselves, unlike children or disorder

people

,

thus

the authority no need to spent some country's taxation to encourage

this

group. Another reason is,

goverment

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government

should utilise

this

budget for crucial infrastructures

such

as road, city

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trains

, and other urgent problems as it

tremadeously

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tremendously

effect for all .

Accordingly

,it is apparent that investment in big

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scale

could help the

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majority

of

people

To sum up, it can be

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emphasized

that despite some

people

think that spending money

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on

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adults' education is the waste of money, others think that

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it

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can improve life

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quality

of

peple

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people

and can eradicate the poverty problem. As a

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result

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,

government

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the government

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should

trade off

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this

budjet

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budget

for entirely

effecive

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effective

allocating for their

people

.