Nowadays many people have access to computers on a wide basis and a large number of children play computers games. What are the positive and negative impacts of playing computer games and what can be done to minimize th bad effects?

As we March triumphantly towards glare and glitter of sophisticated technology life become a bed of roses by considering to
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access in technological gadgets increased significantly over recent decades by considering to
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major chunk of
children
are inclined towards the
computer
or mobile
games
.
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a mixed bag of both positive and negative impacts on juveniles. Some remedial actions should be taken into consideration in order to curb the noxious effects. To commence with the positive side of playing online
games
on PC.
First
and foremost,
computer
games
become fruit-bearing for
children
to fill their treasure trove of knowledge as it requires more skills
such
as creative bent of mind, communication skill so on it helps to widen their mental horizon.
Moreover
, there are
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of
games
available on the internet where
children
can play with the international
children
's and it will show that national boundaries are melting down before the heat of technological gadgets and
games
and it not only helps to strengthen the fabric of social bonding but
also
enhance the communication skills.
For instance
,
children
's needs to follow the instructions and think logical in many
games
as well co-operate with teammates, that are currently tickle the
fency
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fancy
of juveniles .
such
experiences will be beneficial to a child's growth. Apart from
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some negative effects are there which cannot be neglected.
firstly
, If
children
spend
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more time in front of computers it will create
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impact on their health and eyes
such
as their eyesight will be lighter ,
also
there are more chances that they become addicted to
games
and don't go
outisde
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outside
for playing outdoor
games
or sports it is not superior for their health. In conclusion, there are a lot of benefits of playing
computer
games
but some disadvantages too. In order to minimize these problems, parents should put a rein on the length of time their child spends on playing
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the game
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game
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and
also
keep eyes on their
children
that,what their
children
observe by the game which they play.
This
will help to reduce some negative effects by playing
computer
games
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