Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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there is an argument about what is the most important issue and need more consideration in countries. while many authorities think that economic
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need special
progress
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, others believe that other types of
progress
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are equally important.
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, in my idea
governments
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ought to prioritize all
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to boost their countries. On the one hand, it is no exaggeration to claim that one of the most important social
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is the economic problems that have a direct impact on citizen’s life in a country.
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, many
governments
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think that it needs more
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because their goal is that enhance the economic aspect of their
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's lives.
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, in Iran,
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attempt to increase the rate of jobless and rise the labourers salary and most of their annual programs and budgets are about
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type of issue.
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, I agree with some
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that think most
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need
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as well like scientific investigation and military
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.
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, If authorities invest in a scientific investigation
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as industry innovations not only can be an independent country in terms of producing their necessary goods but
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it can make many job opportunities for
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and has many merits effect on the economy as well.
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, when
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progress
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their wapen and the other aspect of militaries, it helps to the country’s security that one of the significant
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for all nation. To conclude,
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economical
progress
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has a wide impact on
people
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's lives in a country, the government should prioritize their needs and
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all of them if they want to succeed and they do not neglect any type of
progress
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.
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