the youth are not interested in reading newspapers or watch the news on TV. What are the reasons?

In recent days, in many nations, some of the youth
people
are not interesting
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reading
newspapers
or watch the
news
on
TV
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I will explain why a few young
people
read
newspapers
or follow
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on
TV
.
To begin
with, there are some causes behind that
this
issue. Some adult
people
might feel bored reading
newspapers
and flapping papers searching about things they might
interested
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on
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like arts
news
.
In addition
, some
of
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newspapers
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the newspapers
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contains
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local
news
which is not
attracted
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to younger
people
.
For example
, some
newspapers
consist of history and violence to war and some of them consist about
political
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politics
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.
In addition
, many researchers founded that older
people
bought
newspapers
more than the younger because of technology. Younger
people
know how to search on the internet and found it easier to reach the
news
instead
of buying
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newspaper
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newspapers
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or wasting their time
to watch
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it on
TV
while older
people
found it difficult using the internet.
On the other hand
, there are some solutions to
this
issue. Editors should write about what young
people
are interested
on
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and verities in subjects to fit all
kind
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of
people
.
Also
, they can create a website to publish the
news
instead
of using papers because adults might find
easier
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to read. They can
also
write about international
news
not only local
news
. To sum up,
a
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very few young
people
read
newspapers
or watch the
news
on
TV
this
because they might not have time to read or watch it. I really think that we can
solved
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this
issue by
create
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websites and the editors should write about varieties subjects to fit all society.
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