In some countries, more young adults continue to live with their parents even after they have completed education and found jobs. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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It is claimed that many youngsters who already got
degree
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in education and have a job still live with
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parents
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their parents
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.
This
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is the popular
stituation
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situation
in many countries over the world. I believe that there are some advantages and disadvantages
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it and it is equal for both sides.
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of all, living with
parents
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can help young people save
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amount of money
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as renting
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house
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a house
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and buying food. The price of an apartment in many big cities is increasing significantly,
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it is extremely difficult for them to own a flat
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of making efforts in many
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years
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yeas
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years
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.
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, the youth will take care of their
parents
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. In Asian culture,
parents
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usually want their children to live with them and get married in order to be an extended family.
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, my sister has worked in the factory and has lived with my
parents
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in our childhood
house
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. My
parents
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are over 70 years old and they want her to build a family in their
house
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.
On the contrary
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, there are some disadvantages
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this
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situation. Young adults can depend much on their
parents
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because they are not worried about buying
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house
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a house
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for the cost of living. These
parents
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will provide money or fortune for their children,
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the youngers do not
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I need
efforts in their life.
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, the young generation may be scared of getting out of
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comfort zone and accept the present. The youth can avoid the changes due to afraid of
failures
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failure
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. In conclusion,
this
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phenomenon has two sides :
advantage
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advantages
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and
disadvantage
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disadvantages
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. It is
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a challenge for young adults to the make
their
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decision
that is
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suitable for themselves and their
parents
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • cohabitation
  • intergenerational living
  • self-sufficiency
  • financial stability
  • maturation
  • dependency
  • socio-economic factors
  • familial dynamics
  • personal autonomy
  • housing affordability
  • cultural expectations
  • life trajectory
  • emotional resilience
  • nuclear family
  • joint family system
  • economic prudence
  • privacy concerns
  • social stigma
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