Some people think that money is one of the most essential factors in promoting happiness. Do you think people can be happy without much money? What other factors contribute towards happiness?

In recent years, there has been a controversial debate about the key components of
happiness
,
people
believe that one of the most important factors is financial condition. From my perspective, it is possible for
people
to be happy even if they only have little
money
, and there are still many aspects of
life
having a vital role to play in producing/creating
happiness
. There are many reasons why I consider that without
money
people
can still feel satisfied with their lives.
First
of all,
although
money
brings
happiness
to many
people
, there are still many other activities that can make
people
pleased (even) without
money
. A nonprofit organization would be a great/prime example, they work constantly to help strangers in need without looking forward to a financial return which gains them satisfaction by seeing
people
happy and being proud of themselves.
Secondly
, being wealthy is often associated with a busy
life
, while a simple
life
is often synonymous with having a small amount of
money
. To be more specific,
happiness
comes from little things in
life
.
In other words
,
people
living a plain
life
are easier to be happy as they notice and admire basic, little things just like a song, or nice weather which a busy one may not have time to care about. Some methods could be implemented to make contributions to
happiness
. One way to achieve satisfaction in
life
is to be grateful. Specifically,
people
often suffer from mental illnesses like stress, strain because they always have desires of
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higher living conditions like property escalation, career advancement,... without appreciating what they already have.
Therefore
,
people
living with
gratitudes
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can fill their lives with
happiness
. Being realistic is
also
worth doing to improve mental health. Many
people
who are called perfectionists tend to have excessive expectations and
then
fail to achieve them. It results in creating a lot of disappointments,
demotivations
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demotivation
which can be large obstacles
for
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happiness
.
Hence
, having an objective view is conducive to decent mental health. In conclusion, I believe that
people
can be happy no matter how much
money
they have, and there are many other ways to be satisfied.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Promoting happiness
  • Essential factors
  • Financial stability
  • Material wealth
  • Personal fulfillment
  • Contentment
  • Basic needs
  • Maslow's hierarchy of needs
  • Social connections
  • Pursuing passions
  • Well-being
  • Mental health
  • Spiritual practices
  • Personal growth
  • Community service
  • Societal contribution
  • Philanthropy
  • Joy
  • Satisfaction
  • Prosperity
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