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. Solar energy is becoming more and more popular as a source of household energy in many countries around the world. Why is this? What are the advantages and disadvantages of solar energy?

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Energy
 is a powerful commodity that controls the entire functioning of the world. There is no iota of doubt that solar
energy
 has
accepted
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 all over the globe.
This
 phenomenon is offering multifarious benefits to mankind,
however
, there are
couple
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 of problems in getting solar
energy
 . The following paragraphs would cast light on the pros and cons of solar
energy
.
To begin
 with the bright side, solar
energy
 is harnessed without the need of building expensive power plants. People have to install solar panels on their
roof
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roofs
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 and generate
energy
 to run household appliances like fans, refrigerators,
heater
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heaters
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 and so forth. It requires only light rays from the sun which is available in abundance.
Furthermore
,
energy
 from
such
 renewable
source
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sources
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 does not pollute the land or air.
Thus
, it would be a better option rather than going for
energy
 obtained from
non- renewable
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 sources like coal and petrol which are
also
 expensive. On the flip side of the coin, Solar
energy
 is a good alternative for those countries which are quite close to the equator or where sunlight reaches easily.
However
, Some of the developed southern countries are considered as coolest places where people cannot get sufficient sun rays to obtain solar
energy
.
Hence
, It has some restrictions due to which it is not feasible for all the mankind across the world.
Besides
, a
middle class
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 person cannot afford exorbitant solar panels. To sum it up, I would say that solar
energy
 is safe and clean. Admittedly, It will be admired by everybody as owing to
rise
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 in technology, solar panels would be cheaper in the coming future.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Renewable energy
  • Subsidies
  • Tax credits
  • Photovoltaic cells
  • Efficiency
  • Off-grid
  • Carbon footprint
  • Climate change
  • Initial investment
  • Energy security
  • Sustainability
  • Decarbonization
  • Grid parity
  • Feed-in tariff
  • Energy storage systems
  • Payback period
  • Net metering
  • Silicon panels
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