A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not managed correctly. Describe the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world. Do you think that benefits of tourism outweight its drawbacks?

With developments in

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transportation

trasportaion

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industry

, we can see the increased number of

tourists

visiting different places of the world.

tourism

have

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numbers

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of benefits

such

as

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economy

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economic

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growth and

culture

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cultural

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transactions.

However

, there are some drawbacks of it, the most important of

of

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them is

diturping

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disturbing

problems.Considering mentioned views, advantages would

defenitely

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definitely

have more weight than

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bad effects.

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, Both points of view will be discussed

further

.

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discuss

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the good

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points of

tourism

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the tourism

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industry

.It will bring

various

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variety

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of

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benefits; two of the best ones are

economical

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economic

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improvement and

culture

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cultural

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transactions. The

first

thing that

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big

industry

will bring to a country is basically money. So It is important for a government to provide the

infrastracture

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infrastructure

of

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, so

subsequently

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that country will face more numbers of

tourists

and much more money so in that case

economy

will grow. Taking China as an example, with Its

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of historical places, It is a very good destination for

tourists

and

therefore

, It has a strong

economy

.

Next

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there

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culture

transactionns

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transactions

as a

benefitial

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beneficial

point of view.

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pharase

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phrase

means the more people from different nations meet each other, the more

culture

will be known by each side.

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everybody

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every body

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everybody

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knows about Canada and their beautiful way of behaving and

that is

because of so many inhabitants of various countries that visit there and spread their

culture

among

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.

However

,

besides

the good influence of

tourism

, It has some dark sides that

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to be considered.The most notable of them would be

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in calmness between residents. Unlike the

tourists

, inhabitants of the country that has the attention of

tourists

, have their own

life

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lives

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and most of them are employees of an office, so they have to wake up soon in the morning and they would need a peaceful sleep at night.But as

tourists

are so interested to visit all the places and they have no other thing to do,

as a

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they may spend all night making noise and

disturping

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disturbing

others.

For instance

, France has

this

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serious

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serous

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problem with

tourism

acording

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according

to the news. To wrap up, as discussed in advance, there are ups and downs about

tourism

influence on

society

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a society

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where, there is

economy

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economic

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development and

culture

transactions and Its amazing subsequent effects

in

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on

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one hand, and, disturbing issues

on the other hand

.

Although

,

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there are problems with

this

industry

, Its good influence will absolutely overcome Its bad effects.