Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as sahara desert or the antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places.

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Tourism has given diverse experience from your regular life whereas you feel relax from busy

proffesional

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professional

life.

Now a days

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numebr

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of people likes to visit remote places like Sahara or

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or some isolated vast weather conditions geography. I will

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discusses

the

benifits

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benefits

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places like boost in

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, know the culture, learn survival techniques.

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an individual has to prepare themselves to fit for

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locations and

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area one can get to know

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their

way of living, at the same time the

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restaurant

and hotel

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industry

will make more

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resident

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will start getting money from renting their

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apartments

or house. Apart

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they will be connected to the

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part of

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along with

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fashion

and society

experince

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experience

knowledge can

be get

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through

the people who came on the trip. On the

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contrary

, arriving more

noumber

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number

of folks has

adverse

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impact on their environment and eco-system. To

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living for guest one need to cut the tree.

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Sahara or

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their living species will be impacted to full fill the outsider

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accommodation

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being

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cautious

those remote area

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because

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some of the

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or scorpions are very

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poisonous

. To conclude that going

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distant

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region give a divergent

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sense

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learn

to survive in

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adverse condition.

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that

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will really hit area habitat, ecosystem. I personally feel there should be some

boundry

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boundary

so that it should not impact the ecology along with excitement and enjoyment in

tourism

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the tourism

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industry must not be affected.

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