Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as sahara desert or the antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places.

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Tourism has given diverse experience from your regular life whereas you feel relax from busy

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of people likes to visit remote places like Sahara or

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Antarctica

or some isolated vast weather conditions geography. I will

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benefits

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, know the culture, learn survival techniques.

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an individual has to prepare themselves to fit for

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area one can get to know

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way of living, at the same time the

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will start getting money from renting their

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fashion

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the people who came on the trip. On the

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, arriving more

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impact on their environment and eco-system. To

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living for guest one need to cut the tree.

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their living species will be impacted to full fill the outsider

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region give a divergent

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sense

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learn

to survive in

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that

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so that it should not impact the ecology along with excitement and enjoyment in

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industry must not be affected.

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