Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as sahara desert or the antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places.

Tourism has given diverse experience from your regular life whereas you feel relax from busy
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professional
life.
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more
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number
of people likes to visit remote places like Sahara or
Antartica
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Antarctica
or some isolated vast weather conditions geography. I will
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discuss
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the
benifits
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benefits
and
drawback
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of
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such
kind of
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.
To begin
with, there are many advantages of exploring
such
places like boost in
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, know the culture, learn survival techniques.
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of
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an individual has to prepare themselves to fit for
such
locations and
journey
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journeys
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. Touring
such
area one can get to know
thier
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their
way of living, at the same time the
resturent
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restaurant
and hotel
indutry
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industry
will make more
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.
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,
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resident
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will start getting money from renting their
appartments
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apartments
or house. Apart
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this
they will be connected to the
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different
part of
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along with
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different
cousine,
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fashion
and society
experince
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experience
knowledge can
be get
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throgh
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through
the people who came on the trip. On the
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contrary
, arriving more
noumber
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number
of folks has
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impact on their environment and eco-system. To
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living for guest one need to cut the tree.
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to
this
Sahara or
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Antarctica
antartica
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their living species will be impacted to full fill the outsider
accomodation
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accommodation
.
On the other
hand
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a
humen
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human
being
need
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to be extra
cacous
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cautious
in
those remote area
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because
of
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some of the
creature
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creatures
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like
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snakes
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or scorpions are very
posinous
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poisonous
. To conclude that going
such
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distant
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region give a divergent
sence
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sense
of reality to a person.
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one
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to be extra prepared along with he can
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learn
to survive in
such
adverse condition.
Beside
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that
this
will really hit area habitat, ecosystem. I personally feel there should be some
boundry
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boundary
so that it should not impact the ecology along with excitement and enjoyment in
tourism
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the tourism
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industry must not be affected.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • breathtaking landscapes
  • unique ecosystems
  • sense of adventure
  • personal growth
  • indigenous cultures
  • environmental conservation
  • climate change
  • environmental degradation
  • economically disadvantaged areas
  • physical health
  • harsh weather
  • difficult terrain
  • limited access to medical facilities
  • fragile ecosystems
  • habitat destruction
  • basic amenities
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