Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as sahara desert or the antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places.

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Tourism has given diverse experience from your regular life whereas you feel relax from busy professional life. Nowadays more people like to visit remote places like Sahara or Antarctica or some isolated vast weather conditions geography. I will discuss the benefits and drawbacks of

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kind of vacation.

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with, there are many advantages of exploring

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places like boost in the economy, know the culture, learn survival techniques.

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of all, an individual has to prepare themselves to fit for

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locations and journeys.

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, touring

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an area one can get to know their way of living, at the same time the restaurant and hotel industry will make more earnings.

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they will be connected to the different parts of the world along with different cuisine, fashion and society experience knowledge can get through the people who came on the trip.

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, arriving more folks has an adverse impact on their environments and eco-system. To fulfil living for guest one need to cut the trees.

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, Sahara or Antarctica their living species will be impacted to full fill the outsider accommodation. On the other ,hand a human being needs to be extra cautious in those remote areas because some of the creatures like snakes or scorpions are very poisonous. To conclude that going to

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a distant region give a divergent sense of reality to a person.

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one needs to be extra prepared along with he can learn to survive in

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adverse conditions.

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will really hit habitats in that area

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its ecosystem. I personally feel there should be some boundary so that it should not impact the ecology along with excitement and enjoyment in the tourism industry must not be affected.

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breathtaking landscapes
unique ecosystems
sense of adventure
personal growth
indigenous cultures
environmental conservation
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economically disadvantaged areas
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harsh weather
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limited access to medical facilities
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