Some people say that the educational success of a student is the result of the work of a good teacher. Others say it depends on the character of the student. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
A highly controversial issue today relates to whether teachers have a big impact on the student’s educational
success
or not. In this
essay, I am going to examine this
question from both points of view and then
explain why I believe the arguments for the importance of the teacher’s role are stronger.
There are people who argue that most qualified students had been impacted by their excellent teachers in some way during their life. The main reason for believing this
is that great educators always want to extract the maximum for their learners even if it is necessary to dedicate their extra time to it. It is also
possible to say that some students could spend more time learning new subjects looking for impressing their teacher. To illustrate, in my High School where I started to enjoy studying physics because of my excellent teacher’s didactic and due to it I have been graduated in Civil Engineering five years ago.
On the other hand
, others believe that who determines success
is the student by himself. It is often argued that the only person responsible for your success
is yourself. People often have this
opinion because of countless cases where some individuals did not have the internet to study and can achieve their goals on their own. A second
point is that if you did not dedicate yourself to learn your subjects, a good teacher could not make any difference in their future. For example
, some students who do not enter universities even studying in rich’s schools by their whole life, while some poor people enter to it studying alone.
In conclusion, I believe both arguments have their merits. On balance, however
, I feel that a good teacher can make the path to success
much more easy
to achieve. Replace the words
easier
This
is because they will help the student to focus on the right path and to expand their ideas.Submitted by keila_suelen on
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