The death penalty is best way to control and reduce serious crime. To what extent do you agree?
Some
people
believe that capital punishment is no humane way for execution, even if that person has committed a grave offence. Others think that the extreme penalty is necessary to keep the security system efficient in society. Personally, I believe that capital punishment is a necessary evil for a grave offence. This
essay will support my opinion with some reasons and examples.
Firstly
, there are many evil people
who commit sins which
are not forgivable. Correct pronoun usage
that
People
who commit these types of sins or crimes
must be expelled from the premises and also
the
community around the world. Change preposition
from the
For example
, there are many people
who kidnap and kill the
children,women or old Correct article usage
apply
people
for there
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their
benefits
. I believe that all the laws abided Fix the agreement mistake
benefit
by
the government are responsible for the peace in the particular country. These laws made are for Change preposition
by by
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women
women's
womens
, Correct your spelling
women
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children
children's
childrens
or old citizens living.
To avoid Correct your spelling
children
such
crimes
the government must increase the capital punishements
which are there. Correct your spelling
punishments
punishment
For
instance
giving imprisonment for 10 years or life imprisonment is not enough Add a comma
,instance
instead
of
these they may give death penalties Change preposition
apply
such
as injecting venom or hang to death. These people
who do sins must get very threating
punishments so that they get some learning from what they do. These all capital Correct your spelling
threatening
punishements
must be cost-effective so that it is cheap and reasonable to spend money on Correct your spelling
punishments
punishment
this
Correct determiner usage
these
crimes
.
In conclusion, the death penalty is the only one
option in the country or world to reduce the Correct quantifier usage
apply
crimes
and maniacs who try to attempt these threating
and death-taking Correct your spelling
threats
threatening
crimes
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