Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others, however, believe there are better alternative ways of reducing crime. Discuss both.

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is an issue of increasing concern around the world. Opinions are divided as to whether longer incarceration times are effective in combating

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. Those opposed to

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harsh punishment assert that other approaches should be adopted to prevent

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. I subscribe to the theory that in order to tackle

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successfully, longer custodial sentences should be accompanied by other precautionary measures targeting

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the main reasons for

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, along with

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system, to produce good results. It has been argued that the best avenue to decrease the

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rate is to incarcerate offenders for a longer time. The motive of

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severe form of punishment would be to instil fear into potential criminals and recidivists. By way of example, if they are aware that the penalty for heinous

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would be a long custodial sentence, they would be deterred from perpetrating those

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. Ergo, by introducing longer

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,

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can be dealt with effectively. Notwithstanding

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feasible deterrence theory, judges should give reduced sentences where there are extenuating circumstances,

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committed by children or the insane;

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, longer

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provide a way for juvenile delinquents who have been involved in minor

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to educate to more serious ones. Some contend that rather than trying to deal with

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by toughening criminal laws and focusing on draconian punishments, the best approach is to address the possible fundamental causes of

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. Social problems and penury are the root causes of perpetrating of

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; when there are low rates of remuneration for unskilled jobs and prices are extortionate, the underprivileged tend to turn to

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.

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, increasing employment and education opportunities in poverty-stricken areas are of paramount importance. with regard to recidivism, they maintain governments should

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provide funds for community services and rehabilitation programmes. It is believed that while offenders are making reparation for their

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through these programmes, they re-establish positive work attitudes. From

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perspective, not only might

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reduce the rate of recidivism, but

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ease the pressure on the

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system

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of longer

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, I believe in

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of violence-related

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, reduced sentences would aggravate the situation. These In conclusion,

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both sides of the argument are partially right, I take the view that

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perennial problem can be solved through both the deterrent effect of longer incarceration times and governments providing jobs and community services. In fact, these approaches together can be fruitful.