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The line graph illustrates the fish and three different kinds of
meat
consumed in Europe from 1979 to 2004. Units are in grams per person per week against each
year
. Overall, consumption of fish was the same each
year
, and drastic reduction can be observed over
the
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time on the consumption of lamb and
beef
while increasing consumed
chicken
. The most favourite
meat
in the
year
1979 was
beef
, and
chicken
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was not
a favourite
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meat
compared to
beef
and lamb in the same
year
with a little less than 150 grams per week by a person.
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become the most consumed
meat
in 1989 before falling dramatically up to 100 grams. Lam followed the same pattern with a start of 150 g in 1979 and approximately 60 g in 2004. In 2004,
chicken
became the most consumed
meat
and around 250g per week was consumed by an average person.
Chicken
also
had an increasing trend till 1989 before it falls slightly greater than the value in 1984.
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