In the past when students did a university degree, they tended to study in their own country. Nowadays, they have more opportunity to study abroad. what are advantages and disadvantages of this development.
Earlier days, when people completed their masters, they prefer to read in their motherland only. Whereas in recent years, individuals are getting more chances to learn in foreign
countries
. This
essay will discuss both benefits and drawbacks of the above topic with prominent instances.
To commence with the advantages, firstly
, if any person gets chance to do their studies in abroad they will acquire more information along with the knowledge and they get better career opportunities. For
example
, one of my friends, who graduated his
degree in the USA and he got a fantastic job there. Another possible benefit is, individuals are doing job in a Change preposition
with his
host
country, they earn more wages than people who finished their education in own land. If we cite an example
, in Malaysia foreigner's get more salaries than native people.
Despite the benefits, there are ample drawbacks. One of the major disadvantages is ethically they face many problems regarding the food, cultures, cost of living etc., If we take an Indian as an example
, he will face many issues in host
countries
, because Indian culture is different from any other alien land. a second
major problem is students do everything on their own such
as cooking, cleaning, household chores along with their studies. A good example
of this
can be when stayed in Singapore, I was only doing all my works.
To conclude this
, the merits of the populace who are getting chances to study in host
countries
outweigh the demerits. This
development is beneficial for both countries
, such
as motherland and host
land.Submitted by bhargavikanthu on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
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- secondly
- thirdly
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- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
