Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can benefit teenagers and the community as well. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Teenagers can learn a lot through working in the
community
in their free Use synonyms
time
. Many people believe that Use synonyms
this
can be advantageous to the Linking Words
community
and the children because services like picking up garbage and helping elders can teach teenagers to keep the place clean and tidy and respect their elders. I believe, Use synonyms
however
, that they should be paid for their Linking Words
work
and Use synonyms
time
rather than doing it for free.
Children do have free Use synonyms
time
compared to adults. It can motivate them to participate in these activities, utilized Use synonyms
time
appropriately, and get paid. Use synonyms
In other words
, knowing that they will earn through their hard Linking Words
work
without even pushing them, they will participate voluntarily. Use synonyms
For instance
, if a teenager wants to buy pair of sports shoes, he will Linking Words
work
in the Use synonyms
community
and earn that money rather than asking his parents. Use synonyms
However
, if asked to Linking Words
work
for free, they might end up not performing the tasks well. They will find reasons to avoid performing services to the Use synonyms
community
. When forced to do the job, the outcome might turn out to be poor. Use synonyms
For example
, when rewarded, the child will be willing to do duty with utmost care. Linking Words
Therefore
, it should be compulsory to pay, when they are working in their leisure Linking Words
time
.
In conclusion, the Use synonyms
community
should pay children for working because it will motivate them. Use synonyms
In addition
, there would not be any need to force them because they will voluntarily participate considering the reward they will earn.Linking Words
Submitted by nanno1992 on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.
A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion