The increasing housing problem in big cities has social consequences. Some people say that only government can solve this problem.

These days, the density of
houses
has dramatically increased, especially in the urban
cities
, which results in social implications including physical and mental health problems and being harmful to the environment. Someones tend to believe that these consequences can be alleviated by only the
government
. In my opinion, I strongly agree that the
government
plays a crucial role in urbanization as follows.
Firstly
, the
government
has the eligibility to impose the rule and
regulation
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of housing constructions. In order to well house constructing management,
government
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should legally oblige people to limit their authority to build improper housing or
buiding
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.
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high tower over 12 meters should be prohibited in
the
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particular
areas
such
as near ancient
cities
, sanctuaries, and conservative
areas
.
Moreover
, people who violate the rule and
regulation
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will be seriously punished by detaining in
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jail for 3 years or paying
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for
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50,000 Baht. With these penalties and strict
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legislations
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, residents dare not to build
a
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illegal
house
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in the prohibited
areas
.
Secondly
, the
government
has the power to increase the price of the
lands
in the big
cities
. They can discourage citizens to buy the
lands
and build
houses
by imposing expensive taxes on
lands
and
houses
prices
.
For instance
, the
areas
located in the urban
such
as Bangkok should have
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higher
prices
compared to those located in
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, namely Samutprakarn. Due to the expensive
prices
, the
areas
will be used to build shopping malls or condominiums to make the maximum value
instead
of constructing the villages, which have to use
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majority of
lands
. Eventually, the number of housing will be significantly declined as extremely high cost of
lands
. In conclusion,
although
recently the enormous augmentation in big
cities
, especially the urban
areas
has detrimental effects on society as the high density of
houses
, the
government
is considered as the important
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, which is able to mitigate and compromise the problems of the social consequences by implementing house building regulations and increased taxes on the land
prices
.
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