Many people believe social networking sites (such as Facebook) have had a huge impact on both individuals and society. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

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on personal as well as social life of followers, I completely agree with

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becoming addictive to their users ,they spend hours of time on

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they keep using it everywhere even in social gatherings and parties where they had actual

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personalities becomes in practical life isolated ,they may have thousands of virtual friends but when needed in times of hardship they

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the content they follow on

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with fake Identity spread biased information for their individual or their

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interests. Above mentioned websites follow the

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if the follower interested in action movies ,

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together with help of internet and can connect and chat or

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of time take them away from

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lots of health and psychological issues. In

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social media websites have more negative side effects than actual

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society ,

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Many people believe social networking sites (such as Facebook) have had a huge impact on both individuals and society. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Fully explain your ideas

Students should pay their full cost for their own study, because university education benefits individuals rather than society. To what extent you agree or disagree?

Some people think it would be a good idea for schools to teach every yong person how to be a good parent Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Describe the skills a person needs to be a good parent

the growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing.

Countries with long working days are more successful economically, but there are some negative social consequences. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Modern professional women confront a difficulty that men don’t generally face: the struggle to balance the pressures of work and home. In your opinion, how can this difficulty best be ? Give reasons for your answer and include examples from your own knowledge or experiences.