Many people believe social networking sites (such as Facebook) have had a huge impact on both individuals and society. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

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on personal as well as social life of followers, I completely agree with

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becoming addictive to their users ,they spend hours of time on

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networks while surfing or interacting with their online

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they keep using it everywhere even in social gatherings and parties where they had actual

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the content they follow on

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websites is not always right ,as some

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interests. Above mentioned websites follow the

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if the follower interested in action movies ,

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together with help of internet and can connect and chat or

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of time take them away from

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lots of health and psychological issues. In

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social media websites have more negative side effects than actual

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society ,

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individuals should use these

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