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Do you support that the nuclear technology should be used for constructive purposes?

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 a large number of benefits of Nuclear
technology
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. It can be used either in an appropriate or hazardous manner.
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, I believe that it must be used for the betterment of the earth and human life. Nuclear
technology
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 in
food
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 irradiation, a process in which
food
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 can be preserved and kept for a longer period of time, kills the microorganism and
prevent
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food
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 from insects. If there was no nuclear
technology
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 used in the
food
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 industry,
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, a large amount of
food
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 would go to waste every day.
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, I believe that ionizing
food
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 products is a constructive way of using nuclear
technology
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. It is
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 used in the
health care
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healthcare
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 sector. A very small amount of radioactive material is used to check the internal body organs and structure. These technologies have made it easier to diagnose a problem before it becomes fatal.
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, a CT scan can show bleeding in the brain, doctors can take action and prevent death by escalating the problem and taking action.
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, these nuclear machines can save lives.
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, these sources are
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 being used in a disastrous manner. An increasing number of countries now have access to nuclear energy which is used for constructing bombs and weapons. These weapons can cause mass destruction and the radiation emitted can have
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 effects on the species on the earth. Atomic bombs,
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 , used by terrorists can kill a large number of people.
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, it should not be used as it puts the life of every species in danger. In conclusion, radiation energy can be used in many forms, construction or destruction. And, I believe that it must be used to make everyday life easier and make the world a better place and not the opposite.

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task response
Ensure that all parts of the prompt are addressed directly
coherence and cohesion
Use more cohesive devices to connect ideas within and between sentences

Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.

Answer structure for the type of essay

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – advantages
  • Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • The main advantage is...
  • The disadvantage of this...
  • The main benefit...
  • Despite these advantages...
  • One possible drawback...

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