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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Providing Internet access is just as important as other services, such as building roads, so governments should offer Internet access to all of their citizens at no cost. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

#internet #access #services #roads #governments #offer #citizens #cost #support
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The
Internet
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 has become very important in the modern era of technology but providing it for free doesn't seem to be a great idea .I disagree with the statement and have certain reasons for not agreeing with the given statement.
Internet
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 is not as important as other services like roads , healthcare ,transport and other public services which are provided and much needed by
society
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 to survive.
Internet
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 is important to multiple things like paying bills ,booking air tickets or any sort of tickets and staying updated with the rest of the world on regular basis but it can't be considered as the basic necessity for survival. The
Internet
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 has become a necessity in the world of technology and students mostly depend on the
internet
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 for their studies as well as the business persons for their business .Students are the part of
society
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 which actually should not pay and should be given free
internet
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 . University and colleges should be able to provide free
internet
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 on the campuses and free
internet
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 should be available to students even at home or in study areas where they need it the most. Giving free
internet
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 doesn't seem to be a very good idea as the cost associated will be very high due to high users of the
internet
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 .
Internet
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 is a very broad range that consists of good and bad factors like data theft and privacy issues. With free
internet
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 ,
people
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 will start using it for criminal as well as wrong motives which will cause many issues in
society
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 .
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,
society
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 should run on the ethics that everyone should be able to put something towards
society
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instead
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 of looking for free services from the government.Making everything available at free will make the
people
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 lazy and will become a burden on
society
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 and will be eventual collapse due to the high load on few
people
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 to fulfil the demands of the poor ones.
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 of providing free
internet
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 service government should provide
internet
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 at a reasonable cost that most
people
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 can bear and has positive effects on the
people
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.
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