In many countries, a small number of people earn extremely high salaries. Some people believe that this is good for the country, but others think that governments should not allow salaries above a certain level. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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A number of people think that's

governments

should make some kind of threshold for maximum earning per

person

. On the other side, some believed completely opposite it.

Firstly

, everyone in today's world makes their profit or earning by themself. so it is not ideal to think about someone

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in a specific personal financial situation. If some specific

person

takes high salaries

then

they pay more tax as compare to low wage earners. The best example is Microsoft CEO Satya Nandale is getting high salary than the common

person

but he

also

pays more taxes that's make rise government income, so

then

they spend those taxes on some other developments. On the other side, some narrow mind people completely ignore some benefits and think on the opposite side. If government make some fixed level of income that's demotivating young generation as well as they become lazier toward their works and never gives more interest in the future goals. The best relevant example is New Zealand

governments

made some salary threshold for government employees like nurses, police now they not able to get more than $60000 per year. Which already

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demotivate their employees and some of them already left that jobs. In conclusion, my view strongly supports

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the

first

statement.

Governments

do not have the right to interfere with someone success or financial matters. If a

person

earns more money

then

the

governments

make more money than a simple line of understanding.

However

governments

have to encourage their citizens to make more money through hard work or smart work.

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Topic Vocabulary:

incentivize
discrepancy
inequality
social cohesion
equitable distribution
wealth concentration
talent retention
global competitiveness
social unrest
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