Some people believe that traveling is a valuable experience; others say it is a waste of time and money. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

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It is believed that travelling is
important
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and significant life experience.
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, another part of
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consider
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that travelling is lost the
time
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and money.
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essay will discuss both arguments in
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paragraphs. Primar ily, it is often said that travelling is
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interesting way to explore the world and cultures. It is active tourism, and
people
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do not stay in one place, they are always moving
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different places and explore the locality of
country
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the country
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.
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, travelling gives more emotions than just look the videos or photos of nature. Photos and videos never
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that
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feelings, which see eyes, it is
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a static
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picture without expressions. In
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case, landscapes
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as mountains can give happiness and take your breath, the photos
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have
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mind blowing
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ability.
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, tourism
improve
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social skills and learn something new by
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with other cultural representatives. In fact, that
people
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like different cultures, it is interesting to learn and participate in something new. Not only traditions,
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but it can also
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be a language.
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the other
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other hand
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, travelling is
expensive
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an expensive
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hobby and take a lack of
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. Tourists are spending a lot of money
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many travelling aspects.
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, the costs of plain, hotel and guides
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very high.
People
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can spend
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money
for
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deposits or banks. In my
opinion
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traveling
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travelling
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is useful spending the
time
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and play
enormous
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an enormous
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role in socializing, learning the cultures and destroy the barrier between
people
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. In conclusion, travelling is
main
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hobby of
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a lack
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of
people
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, they are spending a lot of
time
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to explore
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exploring
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the planet.
Traveling
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Travelling
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is important for
human
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the human
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mind,
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however
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,however
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is
expensive
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an expensive
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pleasure and take a
time
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to move between countries.
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  • cultural exposure
  • tolerance
  • self-reliance
  • overcoming challenges
  • language proficiency
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  • environmental footprint
  • cultural homogenization
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  • responsible travel
  • global understanding
  • eco-friendly practices
  • accessible alternatives
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