People living in large cities have to face many problems in everyday life. What are those problems? Should the government encourage people to move to regional towns? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
A number of
people
believed that's cities
life have more problems
as compare to rural. I think the local city
council have to
have to expand their Fix the infinitive
apply
city
area rather than tell people
to move outside of the city
.
Firstly
, there are so many problems
in the city
lifestyle. The first
problem is an
everyday traffic during peak hours which makes more pollution in Correct article usage
the
cities
than in rural areas. secondly
living in cities
is more expensive than living in
Change preposition
apply
a
outside of urban land. Remove the article
apply
On the other hand
, Due to high pollution in cities
it's air qualities directly impact on humans life. The best relevant example is the Add a comma
,cities
City
of Delhi which has more pollution and recent studies show that citizens of Delhi have more medical problems
than rural people
.
However
, the City
council have more responsibilities than any other person have. They have to build some new homes, parks,hospitals and education facilities near cities
so people
encourage to move there and if government try to send their citizen in the rural area that's not ideal because of lack of basic facilities in that area. So governments have to try
make their Add the particle
totry
city
bigger instead
of sending to the towns. The best example is Auckland city
. Government trying to make the city
bigger because in some towns they do not have some necessary facilities.
In conclusion, I strongly believed that cities
have more problems
but nothing is impossible in today's world, so governments need to focus on expend cities
and make some developments near the cities
so everyone tries to live nearby the city
.People
living in large cities
have to face many problems
in everyday life. What are those problems
?Submitted by hemant.patel1989 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
