People living in large cities have to face many problems in everyday life. What are those problems? Should the government encourage people to move to regional towns? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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A number of
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believed that's
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life have more
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as compare to rural. I think the local
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council have
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have to expand their
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area rather than tell
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to move outside of the
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, there are so many
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in the
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lifestyle. The
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problem is
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everyday traffic during peak hours which makes more pollution in
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than in rural areas.
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living in
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is more expensive than living
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outside of urban land.
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, Due to high pollution in
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it's air qualities directly impact on humans life. The best relevant example is the
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of Delhi which has more pollution and recent studies show that citizens of Delhi have more medical
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than rural
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.
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, the
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council have more responsibilities than any other person have. They have to build some new homes, parks,hospitals and education facilities near
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so
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encourage to move there and if government try to send their citizen in the rural area that's not ideal because of lack of basic facilities in that area. So governments have to
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make their
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bigger
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of sending to the towns. The best example is Auckland
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. Government trying to make the
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bigger because in some towns they do not have some necessary facilities. In conclusion, I strongly believed that
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have more
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but nothing is impossible in today's world, so governments need to focus on expend
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and make some developments near the
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so everyone tries to live nearby the
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People
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living in large
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have to face many
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in everyday life. What are those
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?
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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  • moreover
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  • therefore
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • urban congestion
  • traffic jams
  • lengthy commutes
  • high cost of living
  • financial strain
  • air pollution
  • noise pollution
  • quality of life
  • green space
  • recreational areas
  • social isolation
  • fast-paced lifestyle
  • public services strain
  • overpopulation
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