It is believed that
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aim of travelling is to give
kind of experience and enjoyment that you will never have at home.
, it was clear that there is another type of group who believe that travelling is just
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of
which you could spend on training and
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of money.
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of
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.
allows you to look at life through new lenses and possibly could give answers to our doubts and our concepts about the accustomed
of thinking. . I guess it is clear that
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travelling allows you to look at familiar and regular things in a completely different
.
, each country has
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own history, traditions, customs and cuisines and the moment when you try something new, you actually realize how huge
world is. You understand that pleasure can be obtained not only through the Internet but
by activities and movements because
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to an unknown country is a great
to take yourself out of your comfort zone. As you
, you will realize how little things could make huge afford to get truly happy.
, all of
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activities are nothing more than memory. Frankly, it is completely useless cause you could
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something new
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another and more effective
. Which will have the greatest impact on you: a week-long trip to the African jungle or weekly walks in the nearby forest? Taking
to walk regularly will give you a stronger connection with nature than on a short trip
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, we must admit that Travelling is a waste of
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because you spend a lot of
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to another, tickets are always expensive and if you
without your family, you actually could
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To conclude, I strongly believe that
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is the best
to get knowledge and experience.
, we need to admit that travelling is not cheap
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activity and for
pleasure and
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. If you are rich,
you need to
but either
it would be better
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at home.