Some people believe that travelling is a valuable experience; others say it is a waste of time and money. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
There is
group
of people Add an article
a group
which
guess that get a trip is an excellent way to gain good experience, while others believe that it is Correct pronoun usage
who
rip-off
activity and Correct article usage
a rip-off
waste
of free time. Correct article usage
a waste
This
essay will discuss Linking Words
the
both Correct article usage
apply
of
views in Change preposition
apply
Linking Words
next
paragraphs.
What humanity likes in Correct article usage
the next
voyage
is that person can see different amazing ancient places. Many Add an article
the voyage
artifacts
and just beautiful sceneries are able to reduce Change the spelling
artefacts
stress
and depression of the Correct article usage
the stress
traveler
by distracting him from his daily routine. Speaking about stress and other neural system issues, Change the spelling
traveller
individual
is maintained by trips, since negative emotions, which were contained in him, are starting to be replaced by positive ones. By the way, according to the statistics, Add an article
the individual
an individual
majority
of humanity is living in bad Correct article usage
the majority
ecology
places, Replace the word
ecological
such
as Linking Words
desert
or locations with Fix the agreement mistake
deserts
huge
Add an article
a huge
the huge
amount
of greenhouse gases. Fix the agreement mistake
amounts
For instance
, if citizens of Linking Words
desert
get a chance to be in Correct article usage
the desert
foreign
country he will be over the moon with it. Add an article
a foreign
Therefore
, if people have some issues, they can Linking Words
attempt
get Add the particle
toattempt
far
away trip.
On another hand, it is said, that Correct article usage
a far
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this kind
of activities are really costly and have Fix the agreement mistake
these kinds
minimal
Add an article
a minimal
the minimal
result
. Fix the agreement mistake
results
Average
person, according to the statistic can not Correct article usage
An average
to
do what he wants. Another concern Change the verb form
apply
which
might be faced is Correct pronoun usage
that
language
barrier. If someone is eager to travel to another country, he ought to know how to speak Add an article
the language
a language
on
their traditional language, Change preposition
apply
however
memorizing some need phrases could be hard too. The Linking Words
last
thing which Linking Words
tourist
should know is that extremely Fix the agreement mistake
tourists
fast changing
of environment can result in some illnesses like allergy, headaches and stomachaches. Add a hyphen
fast-changing
For instance
, if Linking Words
man
is going to travel, he must be aware Add an article
a man
the man
from
three problems, there are huge costs, Change preposition
of
limit
of overseas vocabulary and possible diseases.
To sum up all arguments above, I am comprehensively convinced that these two Add an article
the limit
of
views have good arguments, but from my perspective, travelling is the best way to relax.Change preposition
apply
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