Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Students are more influenced by their teachers than by their friends. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Some people believe that teachers are more influential than
friends
.
However
, I think that
friends
have a greater
influence
on us. I feel
this
way beyond
one
reason that I will explore in the ensuing essay.
First
of all, students are mostly influenced by their
friends
, as they spend most of their time with them. We take our classes with them, go
traveling
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, watch movies, throw parties, play with them, and do many other things together. All of these give room for their
influence
in our life.
For instance
,
one
of my
friends
used to play games till midnight, and sometimes, for
this
reason, he would miss some classes
also
. For
this
issue, teachers tried to help him by giving some suggestions and
also
taking some other steps to tackle his problem, but they could not solve it. Some days later, we decided to help him, so we went to his house routinely some days later and tried to see how much we could do. Surprisingly,
one
month later, we found that we were seeing a new person, who had changed his lifestyle and had become a good student.
This
is a good example of how
friends
influence
us.
Secondly
, their psychology is quite similar to ours, which is
one
of the great reasons for
this
influence
. As we are the same age, their thinking reflects our situation very well. My personal experience is a compelling illustration of
this
.
For example
, a few years ago, when I was searching for a university, I became confused between two universities.
One
was quite popular, the other was
student friendly
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. Subconsciously, I preferred the latter, but I was confused. So, I went to take suggestions from my college teachers. They suggest picking the
first
one
, as the school’s reputation can be helpful in getting a good job. I liked the teacher's advice.
However
, I consult with some close
friends
, who advise me to go with the
second
option because a student-friendly university will help me gain more knowledge while
also
providing me with a friendly environment. I just loved their thoughts and enrolled in that friendly university. At the end of the day, I found that they gave me a good suggestion, influential, which matched with my thoughts, and helped me in my career.  To summarize, our mates have more impact on us than professors because they are with us most of the time, and their ideas are identical to ours.
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  • mentorship
  • influence
  • peer pressure
  • academic interests
  • social behaviors
  • guidance
  • career paths
  • digital age
  • foundational skills
  • supportive family environments
  • hindsight
  • instilled
  • amplified
  • align with
  • life choices
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