Many people today are choosing to live and work in another country after graduating from university in their home country. Why is this? Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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Migrating to another country after graduating from University is a phenomenon far from new.
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, in recent years
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tendency has boosted considerably. While some nationalists claim is unfair to use the country´s education system and not give anything back to the community, I believe people should be free to choose where they want to settle and make a career. From the desire for new challenges to the pursuit of economic opportunities, there are several reasons why young graduates decide to start their careers abroad. Developed
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like Australia or Canada, encourage the arrival of skilled professionals offering wealthy wages and excellent quality of life.
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, engineers tend to be in high demand in those
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and the income can be even 10 times what they would receive in Argentina or India. As a consequence, it does not sound crazy that qualified people choose to migrate after finishing their studies. There are
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some voices against
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behaviours, especially in
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where University’s fees are mostly or entirely covered by the government. They claim that
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what sociologists call the “human capital flight” is detrimental to their economy and unfair with the efforts made to provide
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an advanced education.
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, a teacher who received free and excellent training in Argentina could leave without giving anything back to the children of their own country.
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, if the majority of professionals migrate after finishing University, the country would experience a substantial decline in high skilled workers and the whole economy could collapse. Human capital flight is a phenomenon that deeply concerns some undeveloped
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, but even in the impossible hypothesis of a massive exodus of brains, everyone should be free to settle wherever they desire as long as they fulfil immigration regulations and requirements.
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