There is growing evidence that man-made activities are making global temperatures higher. What might be the man-made causes of temperatures rising? How should we deal with this problem? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

One of the major reasons for global warming is man-made activities.

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are cutting

trees

and producing

carbon

dioxide

. To solve these problems, humans have to

use

things

that are not harmful to the environment.

This

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causes

and

solution

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for

this

problem.

Firstly

, people cut

trees

to make papers and houses. Cutting

trees

will make the pollution bad

,

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because

trees

can incorporate

carbon

dioxide

and produce oxygen. If

this

does not happen the pollution and global warming will stop.

Secondly

, producing

carbon

dioxide

is another reason. Humans

use

cars

,

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and burn garbage and plastics. They cut

trees

, so plants cannot incorporate carbons and

this

causes

the world’s temperature to rise. To solve

this

problem people should not cut

trees

and produce

carbon

dioxide

, but

this

is difficult. Due to

this

,

use

things

that do not harm the environment and are useful in life.

For instance

, papers can be made from stones. It is waterproof and not easily ripped. If everyone starts to

use

this

paper made from stones, the environment does not have to be damaged and is very useful in daily life. The solution for

the

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carbon

dioxide

has two

things

.

First

,

for example

,

use

electric

cars

when travelling. Electric

cars

do not produce

carbon

dioxide

,

in

addition

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there are no problems with using oil. It moves by batteries.

Secondly

, stop wasting too much trash. Plastics can be reused and other

things

can be

also

reused.

For example

, donate clothes, toys and books to children who are living in developing countries. It is better to

use

than burnt and

causes

high temperature. In conclusion, the main two

causes

of temperature rising are damaging plants and producing

carbon

dioxide

.

On the other hand

,

this

can be solved by making papers from stones, using electric

cars

and recycling trash.