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Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programs.

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The pie charts illustrate the proportion of the ages of the Yemen and Italy community in 2000 and forecasting details for 2050 Overall, consider to the Yemen community, half of the proportion has been
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 children in 2000. In 2050, it has been changed and the majority
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 have been shown 15-59 years. Details of Italy the majority
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 were indicating the age of 15-59 category.
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 of all, in 1995 local calls was accounted for approximately 72
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. From 1996 and ,1999 many
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 have been used by domestic lines. It was increased over the time period and
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 reached the peak amount and it was almost 90
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, between 2000 and 2002 it was declined by approximately 18
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, mobile phones have been significantly growing
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time period. In 1999 it was about 12 and in 2008 it was reached around 43
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, local and international calls have been dramatically increased. In 1995 about 34 and from 2002 accounted for about 62
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 in billions. To sum up, the majority of UK
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 used by local fixed-line compared with other two categories.
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