Governments should fund scientific research rather than commercial organizations. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

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opinions about subsidising scientific studies by authorities
instead
of commercial companies. I partly agree with
this
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perspective
as
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find it hard to bring benefits for regular
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civilians
from breakthroughs
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were sponsored by certain groups of people. It might be said that power concentrated in hands of the people with own intentions can cause regrettable outcomes for the population as it concerns our life. In case
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research
is
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successful
, its results are possible to be used to raise interest to
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investor
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or to multiply current capital by exploiting study results. Many organisations tend to establish
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in specific fields and excellence
such
as invention and cure for several diseases is able to affect the way how it will be contributed among the nation.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
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  • societal benefit
  • sustainable energy
  • equitable distribution
  • financial returns
  • bias and manipulation
  • integrity
  • large-scale projects
  • space exploration
  • accessible
  • transparency
  • public education
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