In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion about this?

Population
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is increasing day by day, due to that
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mostly
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people are migrating toward big
cities
. Metro
cities
have been
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overpopulated
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over populated
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.
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Mostly
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locations are filled
by
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houses. One group of individuals think that
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most important is to save greenery and should avoid
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any new constructions near villages. In
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, I will describe, it’s better to utilize the countryside
areas
.
First
and
for most
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, it is evident that humans are shifting in the metro
cities
frequently for bread and butter.
As a result
,
plethora
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a plethora
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of homes are needed but
cities
are filled and no other lands are available for the
constructions
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construction
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.
Furthermore
, Urban
areas
are full of dirt and traffic congestion because
of
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that survival is difficult in these societies. Will we get
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area
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,
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, greenery in the main
cities
? Definitely not! If people construct houses in
countryside
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the countryside
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, they get fresh air and greenery.
Secondly
, rules and regulations can be made by the government and the local authorities for the builder, so that, they will not try to harm sites.
Community
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The community
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can
also
prevent pollution and can maintain
ecosystem
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the ecosystem
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.
Although
Sociologists perceive that, it can be polluted by society but due to
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of
populace
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, we do not have many options.
Additionally
, fresh air and open space have myriad benefits.
For instance
,
healthy
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mind is directly related to
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a healthy
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body. Living in
full
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congested society would be risky in many ways. To vindicate, I had a small apartment with no place for parking, garden, play
areas
for children.
Moreover
,
outside
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the outside
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is full of traffic and dirt which affects our lungs and increase stress. To conclude, due to spike in residents, it is need of the hour for fresh houses which is not possible in the urban
areas
. Even I think countryside house has
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of advantages. Government and local bodies can make it easy
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if they implement strict rules related to impurity control.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Urbanization
  • Ecological benefits
  • Biodiversity conservation
  • Carbon sequestration
  • Sustainable development
  • Eco-friendly building materials
  • Green architecture
  • Government policies
  • Urban sprawl
  • Infrastructure
  • Smart planning
  • Agricultural lands
  • Rural areas
  • Population growth
  • Environmental sensitivity
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