Some people think that government should invest more money in teaching science than other subjects in order for a country to develop and progress. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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government

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to outlay more

fund

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in coaching

sciences

than other courses in order for

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land to improve and progress. Some people may think that

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government

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the government

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should spend

for

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teaching

science

to develop the

country

. From my perspective, I do not agree with invest money

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to

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study

in

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science

is wasted the time for some people. It is widely believed that

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offer more money for teaching

sciences

than other

subjects

such

as

Mathematic

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and English is help to develop a

country

and it

also

contribute

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well-paid jobs in the future.

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may be

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true but, if the

government

invest many

subject

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for pupils who are unpleasant to

study

in

science

there are more advantages than

study

in

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subjects

that they not interesting in. Learning in other courses is make students visually spectacular for

study

.

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brings me to the

second

part, for

study

in

sciences

some students may not pleasant to learning and that might make student gain the worst education outcomes.

Consequently

, pupils will waste the time

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a major that they do not wish to

study

and make them slow down to develop the

subjects

that they totally agree to

study

. To illustrate, if student

want

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to be a lawyer they supposed to learning in

subjects

that involve the laws and it will help to progress a

country

because

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they could be a great lawyer.

Furthermore

, a

country

could improve from learning in terms of digital and technology rather than

science

because nowadays technology is more essential and expand in the wild world. In conclusion, on the one hand, the

government

should pay for teaching in

sciences

is necessary for developing a

country

.

On the other hand

,

government

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should

also

support the individuals that happy to

study

in

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other

subjects

. From my point of view, nowadays there are many

subjects

to develop the

country

.