Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion.

There's currently an ongoing discussion about sports events that involve several countries. I strongly believe that the benefits of these celebrations far exceed the potential disadvantages that they may have.

To begin

with, the nation in which these games is celebrated automatically becomes a great touristic attraction,

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the high acceptance that

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sort of

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have.

Consequently

, the whole country is expected to experience an increase

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its overall wealth.

For example

, as of 2009 people's quality of living in Brazil experienced a huge increase after it becoming the

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Olympic

Olimpic

city that same year.

Besides

this

, international contests are

also

a good way to motivate athletes and increase their performance since it is clearly perceived as a reward for their effort and discipline. It is true,

however

, that international celebrations have been the source of many experts that

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of the catastrophic environmental consequences they have. In fact, transportation alone may produce roughly 25% of the total greenhouse effects that a city generates yearly under normal circumstances.

Nevertheless

, there are several new rising ways of

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transportation

that have been shown to dramatically reduce

this

rate of pollution; be them used as the

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way of transport, the issue would be practically solved. In general, international events have a great impact

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the country where they take place, and

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problems that they carry, if

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addressed

correctly, can be considerably reduced.